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Monday, May 25, 2020

Returning to school writing

Hello. My writing is a writing that is about  me and the school and  coming back to school. Its about my feelings too.  Here is my first draft.



Please give me some feedback.

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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 26, 2020 at 12:55 PM

    Talofa lava arlo this is Mele you forgot how to spell night and before may be next time you will spell it right I like how you remember the fu stops and like how say that you're mom packed you're lunch for you.

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  2. Mrs CassidyMay 26, 2020 at 7:39 PM

    I have seen you when you get to school Arlo,and you always have a smile on your face as you come through the gates.You always say good morning which is lovely to hear.Thanks for joining in with the games of Elastics today.
    Have you ever played it before?.

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  3. Mrs CassidyJune 3, 2020 at 6:35 PM

    Hello Arlo.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. Mrs CassidyJune 9, 2020 at 6:17 PM

    Hello Arlo.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.

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  5. AnonymousJune 12, 2020 at 12:03 PM

    Hello Arlo
    are loved the was you were talking about your feelings for school. I would love to see more blog post about you.

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  6. Mrs CassidyJune 22, 2020 at 7:24 PM

    Hello Arlo.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.

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  7. Mrs CassidyJuly 7, 2020 at 10:32 AM

    Hello Arlo.
    I can't wait to see your next blog post.Have a great week and I look forward to reading your next blog.Keep dry and have a super holiday.

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