I was a pupil in Uru Mānuka and this blog is where I shared my learning.
I loved this Story about your pet giraffe Arlo, very creative! love Mum :)
Hi Mum. thanks for commenting on my blog. I loved your comment. next time you could tell me more obout it and wich part was your favourite or you could tell me about the picture at the top of the story.
Hello Arlo. It was a good idea to include your plan with your story. I can see how you organised your writing.
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I loved this Story about your pet giraffe Arlo, very creative! love Mum :)
ReplyDeleteHi Mum. thanks for commenting on my blog. I loved your comment. next time you could tell me more obout it and wich part was your favourite or you could tell me about the picture at the top of the story.
DeleteHello Arlo. It was a good idea to include your plan with your story. I can see how you organised your writing.
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